This blog is for INDA students investigating the relationships between beliefs and buildings. This will be the digital venue for posting student work, commentary among students, and critiques.
Much improved! Much clearer and more compelling information. So, what is your site? What is your program? Do you have a concept model (a new one)? Also, could you visually catalogue more of these parables? Finally, while the information is much more clear, there are too many cartoons that you downloaded from the internet. Plus there are too many colors. Overall, this has the effect of your presentation looking a bit too precious, too much like what I would imagine a powerpoint would look like at a dentist convention. See if you can make your information more like what you would see at http://www.visualcomplexity.com/vc/
come to studio tomorrow with 1) a concept model 2) a complete site plan 3) a taxonomy of your stories 4) a program 5) revised version of the visuals you posted. See you tomorrow
Hi Will,
ReplyDeleteMuch improved! Much clearer and more compelling information. So, what is your site? What is your program? Do you have a concept model (a new one)? Also, could you visually catalogue more of these parables? Finally, while the information is much more clear, there are too many cartoons that you downloaded from the internet. Plus there are too many colors. Overall, this has the effect of your presentation looking a bit too precious, too much like what I would imagine a powerpoint would look like at a dentist convention. See if you can make your information more like what you would see at http://www.visualcomplexity.com/vc/
come to studio tomorrow with 1) a concept model 2) a complete site plan 3) a taxonomy of your stories 4) a program 5) revised version of the visuals you posted. See you tomorrow
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